주제
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영작
When I have a meal with my favorite food, I sometimes eat too much than as much as I can handle. And at that point, I don’t feel being fulled even if I exceed my limit way much, because I eat it so fast when it’s my favorite food. But as you know, the habit of having too much and eating fast are the one of the worst things to live healthy.
When I have a meal with one of my favorite foods, I sometimes eat way more than I can handle. with my favorite food → “내가 좋아하는 음식과 함께 식사한다”는 영어로는 어색해서 with one of my favorite foods 또는 when it’s one of my favorite foods로. too much than as much as I can handle → 문법적으로 혼합 오류.
→ way more than I can handle이 자연스러워. (“감당할 수 있는 양보다 훨씬 많이”)
At that point, I don’t even feel full, even though I’ve clearly gone over my limit,because I eat really fast when it’s something I love. feel being fulled → ❌ → feel full이 맞아. (“be fulled”는 존재하지 않음) exceed my limit way much → ❌ → go over my limit / eat way too much처럼 자연스럽게. I eat it so fast when it’s my favorite food → 문법상 맞지만 really fast가 더 자연스럽고 구어체 느낌.
But as you know, eating too much and eating too fast are some of the worst habits for staying healthy the habit of having too much → “having too much”보다 eating too much이 맞음 (음식 이야기이므로). are the one of the worst things → ❌ → are some of the worst habits (복수명사 일치). to live healthy → ❌ → for staying healthy 또는 for your health이 자연스러움.
Like that, we sometimes might not follow the good way for my life. We should endure a painful experience, which could be really a minor thing, like not drink a glass of beer during a meal. Obviously, we might feel unpleasant avoid following bad habits. But the farther we go away from the bad habits, the better we enjoy our lifes with the sound body.
In thes ame way, we sometimes fail to follow hat’s good for our lives Like that → 너무 직역투. 문장 연결 시 In the same way가 훨씬 자연스럽다. might not follow the good way for my life → “좋은 길을 따르지 않는다”는 영어로는 fail to follow what’s good for our lives가 매끄럽다. my life → 주어가 일반적 진리를 말하므로 our lives로 바꾸는 게 자연스러움.
We need to endure a bit of discomfort. Even something as small as not havng a glass of beer with a meal. a painful experience → 문맥상 “고통스러운 경험”보다는 a bit of discomfort가 어울림. like not drink a glass of beer → ❌ → like not having a glass of beer (동명사 형태). during a meal → 자연스럽게 with a meal로.
Of course, it can feel unpleasant to resist bad habits. feel unpleasant avoid following → 문법적으로 틀림 → it can feel unpleasant to resist로 수정.
resist bad habits가 “나쁜 습관을 참다”의 자연스러운 표현.But the farther we stay away from bad habits, the better we can enjoy our lives with a healthy body. • go away from → 보통 “멀리 가다”의 물리적 의미 → stay away from이 맞음.
• lifes → ❌ → lives (복수형).• sound body → 문법상 맞지만 너무 번역투 → healthy body가 일반적.
In conclusion, now I’m feeling tired because of the exceeded meal size. I imagined prevalently like “Wow, I ate too much. but it’ll get better over time goes”, but the fatigue didn’t come in that way. When I finished washing dishes, my body was close to be exhausted. Despite of that warning sign, I played a game with nintendo switch 2, which made my arms and me more tired.
I kept thinking, “Wow, I ate too much, but it’ll get better as time goes by” imagined prevalently → 의미가 안 맞음. kept thinking이 자연스러움. over time goes → ❌ → as time goes by (자연스러운 관용구).
But the fatigue didn’t fade like I expected. come in that way → 어색하고 의미 불명. → “피로가 안 사라졌다”의 의미면 didn’t fade가 정확.
When I finished doing dishes, my body was almost exhausted. washing dishes보다는 doing the dishes가 자연스러운 표현. close to be exhausted → ❌ → almost exhausted 또는 close to exhaustion.
Despite that warning sign, I still played a game on my nintendo switch 2, which made my arms and me even more tired. Despite of → ❌ “of” 빼야 해. → Despite that warning sign with Nintendo Switch → 게임 콘솔은 보통 on 사용. more tired → 이미 피곤함이 있으니 even more tired가 자연스럽다.
알아보자
- be 는 그 상태에 단순히 존재하는 것, stay 는 상태를 계속 유지하거나 머무는 것
- 막연하게라고 말하고 싶을 때
- I vaguely remember that day.
- I had a vague idea that something was wrong.
- Somehow, I felt somthing was off.
- I somehow knew it wouldn’t work.
- For some reason, I couldn’t stop thinking about it.
- For some reason, I trusted him.
- I was thinking about it in a vague way, but nothing specific.
- I had a vague plan to travel someday.